Paula M. Krebs
“Diversity in who’s Interest?”
American Association of University Professors
Vol. 94, Issue 2
Proquest database
Academe. Washington
TC3
2/24/09
http://proquest.umi.com/pqdweb?did=1536192431&Fmt=3&clientId=12441&RQT=309&VName=PQD
Argument: legacy admissions for colleges
Claim: That if a student that is looking to go further in their education by going to college it is easier for the children that are white, and that come from a more wealthier background have better chances to receive admission from the college.
Why I think this is a credible source:
I believe that it’s a credible source because it uses both her own opinions and refers to other scholars that back up her opinions.
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“Diversity in who’s
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Interest?”
American Association of University Professors
Vol. 94, Issue 2
Proquest database
Academe. Washington
TC3
2/24/09
http://proquest.umi.com/pqdweb?did=1536192431&Fmt=3&clientId=12441&RQT=309&VName=PQD
Argument: legacy admissions for colleges
Claim: That if a student that
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is looking to go
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further in their education by going to college
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it is easier for the children that are white, and that come from a more wealthier background have better chances to receive admission from the college.
Why I think this is a credible source:
I believe that it’s a credible source because it uses both her own opinions and refers to other scholars that back up her opinions.
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-->[Again, this does not seem to be related to legacy admissions.]